"A Savage Jungle"

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    • maurojr11607
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    "A Savage Jungle"

    As i sit in this big, giant jungle and i see all the amazing and Briliant creatures that live here.
    I stare around and i see a groop of giggling hiyenas,
    a group of lions crouding the doorway looking for fresh meat to hunt.
    The weak prey slowly scurry from the hunting grounds i turn to see im in skool. 

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    sk8erpoet commented on "A Savage Jungle"

    03-17-2011

    its cool dude..aside from the grammer errors haha..i like how you used a metaphor to show it was school..great write..sk8

    maurojr11607

    03/17/2011

    Tanks and you know i was never good at grammer...i wrote while i was in class..ironic isnt it

    sk8erpoet

    03/17/2011

    i know i know haha..either way its good

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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