A second thought and a quarter

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    • LeeLee420xx
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    A second thought and a quarter

    Only 16 she sits alone.

    Out on the curb in front of a run down restaurant.

    Hungry and scared.

    Cold and confused.

    Where did she go wrong?

    How did she become used?

    Left forgotten by the one she had loved.

    Her body had never seen so many drugs.

    Home a memory.

    She wanted back.

    Alls she needs is a quarter for that.

    She sits and she thinks.

    They would take her back.

    She knows they love her more then that.

    Even as that stubborn girl.

    Who thinks she has the whole wide world.

    Figured out in 16 years.

    She has got allot to learn.

    So she looks up from her dirty guttered perch.

    To ask for the help That will pull her from this lurch.

    There is a man passing by.

    With a briefcase held close to his side.

    She asked loudly so he can hear.

    "Do you happen to have a quarter to spare?"

    He looks at her and says "Get a job!" and then keeps moving on.

    She gives up too tired to try the tears form in her eyes.

    She thinks of where she can go.

    To crash to hide.

    To be unknown.

    Then here he comes again.

    This man on the move.

    He leans down to her and says "Here I am sorry , Go home."

    Then away he goes again on the move.

    But what he left behind was a quarter.

    In her cold dirty hands it was almost heaven.

    She called her home , they came and got her.

    This man saved her life.

    With a second thought and a quarter.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on A second thought and a quarter

    08-07-2010

    wow, that was a very heart wrenching story, and you told it so well your words painted the picture in my mind, and it flowed very smooth......great read dear. love asha

    LeeLee420xx

    01/05/2011

    thank you so much ...

    kdarcy commented on A second thought and a quarter

    08-07-2010

    Reminds me of piece I just read by songmanpoet here on OP. Check it out, Thanks for sharing compassion is a nice read, be well

    LeeLee420xx

    01/05/2011

    thank you

    Charlie23 commented on A second thought and a quarter

    01-24-2010

    Very real in your writing! I can picture the scenario, and found myself very pleased when I read the ending. I get the tag as it could make one very emotional!

    LeeLee420xx

    05/15/2010

    thank you :)

    Shay86 commented on A second thought and a quarter

    03-21-2009

    I can relate to this poem sooo much this is a great poem

    LeeLee420xx

    05/15/2010

    thank you

    jaxsammyslayer commented on A second thought and a quarter

    03-15-2009

    your poem was great something that i can relate to

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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