Surviving The Storm

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    Surviving The Storm

    All you want 
    is to call my name 
    Your paryers are answered 
    everytime we play 
    So put your lips 
    to the tip of the mic 
    and sing a song 
    Of lust filled nights 
    I'm coming down on you 
    pouring rain of sin 
    Open up wide 
    and let me in 
    I am the warrior 
    brandishing my sword  
    stabbing deep into you 
    cutting through your core 
    Cries of passion 
    shed tears of pleasure 
    rivers of sweat 
    drown the treasure 
    The raft is thrown 
    at the mercey of the waves 
    The massive storm 
    releases it's rage 
    Along for the ride 
    desperate to stay afloat 
    gasping for air 
    hands around your throat 
    Nearing the edge
    of known reality 
    nerve endings on fire 
    your nails cut through me 
    Biting down 
    thrashing about 
    Muscles tense 
    screaming out 
    A final cry 
    cuts throught the night 
    exausted and shaking 
    eyes absorb the light 
    the ocean calms
    the storm subsides 
    my trophy is
    the smile in your eyes 



    All you want 
    is to call my name 
    Your prayers are answered 
    every time we play 


    So put your lips 
    to the tip of the mic 
    and sing a song 
    of lust filled nights 


    I'm coming down on you 
    pouring rain of sin 
    open up wide 
    and let me in 


    I am the warrior 
    brandishing my sword  
    stabbing deep into you 
    cutting through your core 


    Cries of passion 
    shed tears of pleasure 
    rivers of sweat 
    drown the treasure 


    The raft is thrown 
    at the mercy of the waves 
    The massive storm 
    releases it's rage 


    Along for the ride 
    desperate to stay afloat 
    gasping for air 
    hands around your throat 


    Nearing the edge
    of known reality 
    nerve endings on fire 
    your nails cut through me 


    Biting down 
    Thrashing about 
    Muscles tense 
    Screaming out 


    A final cry 
    cuts through the night 
    Exhausted and shaking 
    eyes open to absorb the light 


    The ocean calms
    the storm subsides 
    My golden trophy, 
    the smile in your eyes 



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    DeeVoelkel commented on Surviving The Storm

    11-29-2010

    hard passion with a twist. your lines are perfect.

    lastyl commented on Surviving The Storm

    07-16-2010

    Brilliant exotica, I don't think that could be any better!! No wonder the girls are in an uproar!!! lol Great write- MASTER PIECE!!

    Artie

    07/18/2010

    Thx Capt.. This one was a lot of fun to write, and even better to research for lol - I'm glad you enjoyed this - Latrz

    chalkout91 commented on Surviving The Storm

    03-08-2010

    I want to fck this poem. :) its kinda good ....Ilike the build up and than the climax its very sexified

    am2anangel commented on Surviving The Storm

    02-20-2010

    whew what a storm. I'd need that cool rain after this one. very intense and great write. you paint vivid images with your words. great job.-tonya

    redbloodink commented on Surviving The Storm

    01-25-2010

    very intense......................................... red

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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