A SUNNY DAY IN SEATTLE

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this is a story about a guy who rents a stolen car for a rock of coke, then picks up a black prostitute in seattle and smokes crack and has sex until the sun comes up. of course this poem is purely fictional

A SUNNY DAY IN SEATTLE

driving a rock rental

and eating fried chicken

with a piece of chocolate candy

she's so finger lickin'

a straight shooter in her pocket

mine is full of ammunition

and all night long

was our final destination

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WordSlinger commented on A SUNNY DAY IN SEATTLE

11-01-2009

this happens every where there here at the nights destination, so stay inside, WS, lol

monkyntz

11/16/2009

sorry it took me so long to respond to your comments but my computer has been down but i'm back up thanks for your comments i'm glad you enjoyed my nonsense.and while i was waiting on my computer i wrote a bunch more nonsense

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

monkyntz’s Poems (67)

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WESTMINSTER 0
MIRROR , MIRROR 1
SOMEONE STRONG 1
GOOD FRIENDS 1
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DEEDS OF MAN 1
HONEY I LOVE YOU 1
WHY 1
MISTER 2
DEAR GOD 0
ALICE D. 0
GIRL ON THE VERGE 0
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TIME 0
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NEVER YESTERDAY 1
SOME KIND OF NUT 0
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SUPERFEAR 5
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THE WONDER YEARS 2
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WHEN YOU'RE A FLY 2
THE BRIGHT SIDE 1
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THE BEAST 2
HOME 1
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