A Suspect Awareness

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    A Suspect Awareness

    Feelings...sent deep down into the soul...
    Loveliness..that which creates a symphonic beauty
    thrown way deep and into
    Fragments of nature turning with every hour
    Devouring and then impowering,
    to never let it soured by what people could do

    The feelings of great passionate sender
    Grasping for days until the sun comes up
    And then rises again, and then rises once more
    But wait, for the ultimate what you've been waiting for
    Yeah...the ultimate, I mean that which had
    cultivated in a mind rush so deepened
    Anything else you've even known
    It had you thinking og creeping to complete

    Retreating into a somberness
    Then becoming one with the
    nature of the beast
    Reliving mindsets of past pleasure
    No one but the other could ever measure
    Now, having had these intimate feelings
    Thoughts are what could rekindle the fire
    Inspiring only to a true romance
    Two people could make it to transpire

    I'd be a liar, if the truth was not this good
    My sentiments towards this piece
    Frankly, would never be this good
    I could only leave you feeling misunderstood
    And the peace, though relavent as it should be
    Could only be reached
    If the drama of life's obstacles weren't so bound
    And all of us could feel a bit of peace

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    NayInLove commented on A Suspect Awareness

    02-17-2009

    very nicely done! keep it up :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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