a Tale of the Death of Honor

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    written about some pettry promotion at work, and my reaction to it.

    a Tale of the Death of Honor

    Friends! Comrades! My Brothers indeed!

    Len me not your ears, but bind now our hearts.

    We honorable men are a swiftly dying breed,

    And, because of our creed, let each man do his part.

    Let each brother, after me, pick a maiden rose

    And with its prick swear to walk abreast,

    So within noble hearts our honor will grow:

    With none standing before, but none behind the rest!

    Sound the trump, let the even the echo’s proclaim

    That our sacred brotherhood shall not be trounced!

    Let us walk through gauntlet of storm and steel

    For in the rebellious world, it’s honor alone that counts.

     

    Through marsh and mire the walked along,

    Through boreal and arctic with a gleeful song,

    Side by side, where the honored belong.

    But then they came to a door:

    A heavy door, the hardware tarnished

    But its walnut grain was freshly varnished.

    The hushed voice of Opportunity

    Was heard softly from the other side.

     

    What thinks it of itself, this wall

    That stands here, so bold-chested and tall?

    We can give it a trembling fall,

    For it’s brick and mortar, and that is all.

     

    Good sir, I believe that is not now a choice,

    For cannot you hear the hushéd voice?

    That Opportunity is our just cause to rejoice…

    There is but one way, that I can conceive.

    That door is but one man wide,

    And we all today aim to get inside.

    Let us all let blood, and when that blood has dried,

    Let us our fates and futures receive.

     

    But now we stand in a line, none behind, and none before.

    Who among us shall come first upon that door,

    And who shall trod the footprints, while his brothers discover Opportunity’s core?

     

    For the line is faint ‘twixt honor and pride,

    And thusly greed makes a good living of the meandering mind.

    Nary a noble man would suggest his own name,

    But neither will an honorable man willfully surrender this game.

     

     

    Oh! Your whining and pleading, save us the agony!

    Your postulates paltry, and spare us the philosophy!

    Let us test whose honor is real…

    I will meet this door with my keen, cold steel.

     

    Nay sir, this voice, it calls to me!

    Through the keyhole its sad silhouettes only I can see,

    Let me, for our sake, Let Opportunity free

    And we will meet it as friends…

     

    You wordy warlock! You ill-willing witch!

     The very thought makes my heart sick, and twitch.

    Nay, I will turn the thick door’s switch

     

    Wilt thou provoke me?

    Have at thee, boy!

    I will send you home on your own shield,

    For my will is no mere toy!

     

    And where now is the honor?

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    StandingBear commented on a Tale of the Death of Honor

    06-24-2009

    Congrats on your "petty promotion" at work. Very interesting written work concerning ramifications. Great write.

    Hampton commented on a Tale of the Death of Honor

    06-15-2009

    A shakespearian like tale written with deep meaning and concluding with a question that begs for an answer.

    bforibus commented on a Tale of the Death of Honor

    06-15-2009

    of course being thrown from an alternate reality to this one doesnt take anything from this fantastic poem. i love stories. i love poems. making poems, stories is like creation of mankind. taking different personalities and allowing them to play their parts is what you have done but to also make it sing. could this be anymore perfect im not sure. but fom reading your work. im sure ill find out

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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