A True Friend Indeed

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    Seven this is for you buddy.  I owe you big time. But I know just want a beer. :P

    A True Friend Indeed

    Hey pal, buddy, confidant and friend

    Thanks for being there when--

    My ex put me through hell

    You lifted my hope and my spirit when all else failed

    You got me to believe that there is life after a divorce

    You showed me a new path, route; A new course

    You got me to believe that after a divorce things will be okay

    You got me to thrive for another day

    Whenever I was down, you were always there

    You showed me how a friend could really care

    A friend in need?

    You are a true friend indeed

    Thanks again

    My pal, my buddy, my confidant and my friend

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    Worthless commented on A True Friend Indeed

    03-07-2011

    Yeah, so you can write.. Stay away from the alcohol, it might end you in the same place and then what will your friend say? And I've been to Florida before, so i know a little of how those women are.. basically no clothes and... Men are the same way... Sorry I'm just a Life Hater and i ai'nt no typical women either, I'm a unique bitch born and raised chicken fed in michigan, country trailer trash bitch.. Haha but true.. NOT A TRAILER PARK JUST STRICTLY TRAILER TRASH AND YEAH I HATED IT, but i live with it.. My heart rests in peace in the south...
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    christliked commented on A True Friend Indeed

    11-03-2009

    I get the message and i hope that you are OK, hold your head up and dont make the same mistakes next relationship
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    quickwrite commented on A True Friend Indeed

    11-03-2009

    Very good, it is to have a friend to help you through hard times.
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    countrypoet commented on A True Friend Indeed

    11-03-2009

    I'm glad that you had a true friend to help through this difficult experience.I have been through a similar experience quite awhile ago,but have regained my pride and self esteem and have a good life now.A very good write and a wonderful testament to your friend.Thank you for sharing this .
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    am2anangel commented on A True Friend Indeed

    11-02-2009

    Excellent piece nice rythym and flow. your rhyme was flawless. Great message. Now you owe me a read. lol you can pick whatever jumps out at you.
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