A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

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I WILL DOWNLOAD THE THREE BUTTERFLIES I TOOK PICTURES OF ON THE DAY MY MOTHER DIED ..SOON

A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

AS I WORKED STARING INTO MY MIND
AN ELDERLY GENTLEMAN SAID HELLO
...HOW ARE YOU ARE...YOU DOING FINE
UNAWARE OF ANYONE AROUND,,I GAZED A MOMENT THEN GAVE MY REPLIES
JUST TRYING TO FIX THIS LAWNMOMER IT'S GIVING ME A FIT
GLAD TO HAVE SOME COMPANY...NEDD TO SET DOWN FOR JUST A BIT
HE TOLD ME OF HIS PRESENCE HERE
IN A GENTLE VOICE..BUT RARE
FOR IN HIS VOICE I COULD TELL RIGHT OFF
OF LOVE HE HAD TO SHARE
HE TOLD ME HE FED BUTTERFLIES
I THOUGHT THIS BEAUTIFUL BUT  STRANGE
UNTILL HE TOLD THE WHOLE OF IT
HOW THEY ALL WERE MADE TO CHANGE
THE MIXTURE  BERRIES,BANANA,AND SWEET WINE
WERE FED... HE WATCHED AS THEY WOULD DINE
PICTURES WAS HIS HOBBY...SPENDING ALL HIS TIME
HE REACHED INTO HIS RAGGED OUT VEST TO SHARE JUST A FEW
HOW I SEEN THE LOVE AS HE SHOWED ME JUST A FEW
EVERY COLOR OF THE RAINBOW..EVERY NAME HE KNEW
AS A THOUGHT CAME TO MY MIND IT HAD BEEN A DAY OR TWO
THE DAY MY MOTHER DIED I HAD TAKEN JUST AH FEW
I TOLD HIM OF THE LOSS I HAD AND ABOUT THE PICTURES TOO
AND ASKED IF HE WOULD LIKE TO SEE ..                                                                                                             WHAT I WAS SURE.. GOD  HAD GIVEN ME
..THEN HE SAID  SON LISTEN WELL ABOUT ALL OF PERFECTION
REST ASSURED THEY CAME FROM GOD FOR THEY STAND FOR RESERECTION
AMAZED ..AND ASTONISHED OF THAT PATICULAR DAY
MY TEARS I TRIED TO HIDE
I TURNED MY HEAD TRYING NOT TO FACE.. THIS NEW FOUND FRIEND...MY PRIDE


IT COULDN'T HAVE BEEN MORE THAN A MOMENT
   I FOUND MY SELF ALONE
FOR MY FRIEND.. NO NAME.. HAD VANISHED HE..HE WAS GONE!
...I REMEMBER MOM SAID SON ALWAYS BE AT YOUR BEST
FOR YOU CAN NEVER EVER  KNOW WHEN
  YOU'LL BE TALKKING TO AND ANGLE
AND A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND....



 






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BikemanRJ commented on A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

04-24-2010

A great write that you have presented us with here, Very spiritual and heart spoken. In times of need God does through his spirit lead and guide us. God Bless Randy

Qualin

04/27/2010

thank you RJ well taken....your friend Qualin

wargirl23 commented on A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

03-29-2010

This poem is absolutly wonderful. I have not been exposed to much poetry, but with what i do know, is that this poem is among the best i have ever read.

Qualin

04/18/2010

THE WHOLE POEM FLASHED IN SECONDS,PUTTING IT TO RHYME WAS A LIL' CHALLANGEING,OF ALL I GUESS MY FAVORITE BECAUSE MOST OF IT WAS THE TRUTH,THANK YOU LIL' ANGEL

alb29oclfl commented on A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

03-26-2010

an enjoyable time, one could read many times and still return for more

Qualin

04/18/2010

ONE OF THE VERY BEST COMMENTS ONE COULD EVER RECEIVE,THANK YOU MYFRIEND..I REALLY ENJOY SAYING MYFRIEND AND KNOWING IT IS APPRECIATED.!!!!!

RareNecessity commented on A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

03-26-2010

This a very beautiful write. It touched my spirit in very special way. I believe that angels walk among us. When our soul is truly open, the friend we meet today,may surely be the footprint of our souls journey. Peace and tenderness sent your way. ~RN~

Qualin

04/18/2010

WITHOUT A DOUBT "I KNOW WHAT I KNOW,AND I KNOW AN ANGLEL WAS THERE,WE SHOULD ALWAYS GREET A STRANGER WITH LOVE YOU WILL DESERN THE DIFFERENCE AGAIN THANK YOU LOVELYPOETRESS

SavVySam commented on A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND

03-03-2010

A lovely work you've penned here...I enjoyed the imagery used in your story telling.

Qualin

04/26/2010

hank you any comment coming from you is marked above average ...thanks friend

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PEPPIE SAYS HELLO 9
DON'T MESS WITH FAT LUCY 14
"CAN'T YOU JUST FEEL IT" 6
ON PREASTERS LAKE 25
IF YOU EVER SEE AN ELEPHANT!!!!! 15
DON'T FORGET THE MILK AND BREAD 4
OLE' MULESKINNERS.
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THE LORD OUR FRIEND...CHRI
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A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE 7
THE DAY MY DADDY PRAYED 11
THE WIND SURLEY BLOWS 3
HERE ON "OLE GLORY" 4
A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND 14
having you in my site 5
PASSION OF THE MOMENT 6
MY MOST SPECIAL DAY 6
unconditional condition 8
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