A walk on the beach

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A walk on the beach

As I walk along the beach,
I feel the wind through my hair and face,
I hear the crashing of the waves along the shore.

As I keep walking along I see the stars,
Glowing in the sky like brightly lite candles,
As I walk along the beach,
I am thinking about the love we share.
How I fell in love with you,
How I took the dare.

I think of how my heart holds you deeply,
How I will forever and always care.

I know I will have you for a lifetime,
A life time of walks on the beach...


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Luwonda commented on A walk on the beach

01-07-2011

Beautiful poem! I love the way you describe the love song, the crashing waves and the stars as candles. A lovely simile, I make it one of my favorites.

REGINA2 commented on A walk on the beach

10-27-2010

This is a beautiful poem, sunshine. You are very fortunate to have found that love. I once did but lost it.

sunshine33710

10/27/2010

Thank you for the comment Ragina. We do alot of walks on the beach at night.

knight4696 commented on A walk on the beach

10-04-2010

Sunshine - This is a very romantic write. Nothing like taking a walk on the beach with a loved-one. :) Great job! :) Ken

sunshine33710

10/06/2010

Thank you Ken for the wonderful comment. We just went for a walk on the beach last night.

Chandie commented on A walk on the beach

09-30-2010

good job really like it keep it up...... lasting motivating love

sunshine33710

10/06/2010

Thank you chandice for the comment.

Kristina commented on A walk on the beach

09-24-2010

Really good write... I love this one... keep it up. Luv ya

sunshine33710

09/24/2010

Thank you for the comment Kristina. we take plenty of walks on the beach as a stress releafe. Luv ya too.

sunshine33710

09/26/2010

Thank you Kristina for the comment. We like to take alot of walks on the beach. We like to talk about our problems at the beach. Luv ya too girl!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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