A Warm Day

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  • Happiness

    A Warm Day
    A new day,
    let it be the same.
    Warm rays shine into me
    pouring out life sways.
    It sways me to the center of myself.
    Inward I see out
    Life’s not the same.

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    hdmac commented on A Warm Day

    06-05-2009

    Simple poem. Excellent use of words to show images in the mind. Good use of the word "sways". "Inward I see out" not really understanding that part.
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    StandingBear commented on A Warm Day

    05-05-2009

    Balance within searching out. Another nice write.
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    Phoenix9 commented on A Warm Day

    05-04-2009

    finding the center of ones self is finding your own universe, great write
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    WordSlinger commented on A Warm Day

    04-01-2009

    Some one gave this poem a 3 I gave it a 7 I love it when the Warm rays shine into me
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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