A Wicked Love Story

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A Wicked Love Story





Shadows press a horror sure,
golden memories have become a blur.
Hauntings of my past haunt the very soul within me,
clouded with terrors all about can't you see.

When nights shadow falls,
evils siren calls.
Amidst true terror subdued,
True human human gore is viewed

The sun rises an orb of celestial fire.
Into each nature an angel climbs higher.
His heart of truth is pure,
The slings and arrows it does endure.

Gold and silver glowing bright,
its firey coils remove our sight.
The visage of his heart is falling,
He cannot ev'n hear his god calling.

Mine horror remains in passions grace,
While the wicked harlot has taken her place.
Darkness veils the truth inside of its cover.
The haggard old woman becomes my lover.

Under the cloak of night he steals her breath,
Squeezing  her throat she succumbs to death.

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bluskyinthenite commented on A Wicked Love Story

09-01-2010

oh my god " we dont tell the Indians to fast " they probbaly dont have enough food as its.. ""' Religious program on tv just said that .... religion.. 7 hundrred club... that man has to retire.. Or find GOD... bigot.. i cannt believe that. from a preachers. I'm aplaud

dumplin commented on A Wicked Love Story

12-03-2009

I read this again today and overlooked the typos. I loved it again.

Troubador

12/07/2009

Sorry about the typos

Rygar commented on A Wicked Love Story

11-19-2009

A couple of typos as Dumplin stated, and the flow was inconsistent. That being said, the imagery was right on, an eerie feeling permeates this piece, and the way you brought it home "Squeezing her throat she succumbs to death." was nicely done.

Troubador

12/07/2009

Thanks Rygar

dumplin commented on A Wicked Love Story

11-02-2009

Did you mean to say human twice? You spelled fiery wrong. However, might I say, WOW! Very good imagination!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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