A Winter Night

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    A Winter Night

     Snow falls tonight as a I lay in your arms
    By the fire's warm glow
    I listen to you moan softly in your sleep
    And I feel your breath and oh...
    How it takes my breath away and I yearn
    To wake... to kiss...to love...
    But instead I watch you sleep
    And I hold you close as the snow falls from above
    Watching the delicate flakes dance
    I shiver...but not from the cold...
    But from the warmth of your breath
    Upon my naked body...wanting you so

    By Rita Kay Webb

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    MrGee commented on A Winter Night

    11-20-2011

    WOW! So erotic and paints an exellent picture in the mind of this reader.I especially was enamoured to the verse - But the warmth of your breath. an obvious 10 I never grow tired of reading your work
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    winterkou commented on A Winter Night

    01-07-2011

    Great poem , im thinking about this cold winter night , fresh fallen snow on the ground , and it would be nice to be around a wram fireplace but i dont have one. nice write. winter
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    knight4696 commented on A Winter Night

    12-10-2010

    Wow Rita! A Very Sensuous Poem indeed! Hot enuff to melt the snow! :) Great poem to help warm me up on this cold winter night! :) Great Job! :) Ken
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    StandingBear commented on A Winter Night

    12-10-2010

    What a beautifully written romantic love poem, especially for the one you love during this cold autumn season! SBear
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    koolmom0

    12/10/2010

    Thank you my dear friend Bear, I am happy that you enjoyed reading this piece. :) Rita

    StandingBear

    12/13/2010

    You're welcome my dear friend Rita, reading this excellent piece, I feel the warmth of a cackling fireplace in the dead of winter when I close my eyes. :-) Bear

    MindNumbing commented on A Winter Night

    12-10-2010

    Beautiful Rita... this has a soft elegance to it that most poetry in this genre lack. You've nailed it. Very nicely done!
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    koolmom0

    12/10/2010

    Thank you so much Mind, I am so glad you enjoyed this write. :) Rita

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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