A woman in my place

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A woman in my place

There's a woman in my place,
so you gonna stand there and lie to my face.
all the times i've been seeking you,
all those time you've been untrue,
telling me that i'm "The one"
all the while you've been having your fun.
Tell me, how does it feel to lie?
To manipulate my weakness by,
telling me you love me so,
when all this time i didn't know.
You blamed things on me only
to have an excuse for,
you not wanting me anymore.
There's a woman in my place,
she has already taken my space.
In your heart all you wanted was
someone, not necessarily me,
that's why you're free,
free to go, free to be,
with the one you chose
to give your heart, to give your ring,
there's a woman in my place,
Ain't that something!

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on A woman in my place

11-15-2010

The outrage and hurt are palpable in this one. I wanted to scream the words as I read it out loud. A lot of wolves in sheep's clothing out there, but on the other hand a handful of beautiful, caring, faithful loving men. THE ONE FOR YOU IS OUT THERE. BE PATIENT. Great write.......E

Sx9 commented on A woman in my place

11-14-2010

so life can be a mis judge,which can also be not true,woman are complicated when ,mix with love,so you never know what will turn when you step away,,so here it is,,love it,,

sweetchinee

11/14/2010

lol...thank u!

truth917 commented on A woman in my place

11-06-2010

Wow! nicely written. Some people don't see the clear picture when it's in their faces. They see only what they want to see, say things they don't mean yet pass judgement on another.

Phoenix9 commented on A woman in my place

11-04-2010

Can feel the pain, the outrage and disbelief in this one. there is no trust when this is done to you, makes it harder to fall again and give your heart, we are not all bad, but so few and far apart, hope lives always

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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