A Woman’s Design

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    A Woman’s Design

    The dreams of young girls' is to be swept off their feet
    by a fine prince, and live happily ever after behind
    the whitest of white picket fences!!!

    This search for a young prince proves to be intense,
    as the jungle of manhood has proven to be dense,
    there are all types and styles of species to convince,
    that I’m a Queen hear me and pick me for if you don’t
    you most surely will have missed out on my plan
    for my Women(ly) design…

    All of your manhood dreams are daunting and
    fascinating but once I make you mine they will be
    replaced by the responsibility of making me feel
    like the Queen I’m suppose to be in all my
    womanly reverence, this is not done by coincidence,
    Oh No, I assure you its by a Godly Decree called a Woman’s Design!

    But do take care and you better beware because
    with your eyes your single most important job is
    to fix your longing gaze upon me so strongly
    that it becomes a stare, and to compliment
    the things I wear and how soft is my hair?
    I spent a lot time getting my feminine this way
    and yes I created it and its called a Woman’s
    Design!

    And with my comforting lions, I will birth your
    offspring and sing them lullabys, and nurse and
    feed them using a method called a Woman’s
    Design!

    I’m sorry if I’m sometimes emotional, and
    can change my mind at the drop of a dime,
    I was built that way, didn’t you read the plans
    to a Woman’s Design?

    And I will breed to make you believe that you
    have the lead and are in charge of our growing
    kingdom, but in actuality the whole time its been by
    a Woman’s Design!

    And when you stray, it is my right to portray you
    as that thief in the night to all that will hear, how
    you have subcumb to that other ‘Woman’ s Design,
    but if circumstance becomes or became entwined
    her plan is actually the same as mine, its in the
    desperation section of a manual called
    A Woman’s Design!

    From birth mothers wish for their daughters to
    improve on the template but always remain faithful to
    that very same template of a Woman’s Design!

    So son’s and fathers recall did you do all to and for
    her? Did you honor those Woman’s Design that has
    been around since the beginning of time?

    I as a man can never seem to love right, unless it is ordained, approved and tested and lastly compared
    to that magnificent mystery that is known as a
    Woman’s Design!

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    dmo8647 commented on A Woman’s Design

    09-15-2009

    You are quite amazing to have the insite to a woman's heart and soul!! I commend you on this piece!!

    SILKYTWEED

    09/15/2009

    Thank you so much for reading, more than a lucky guess (smile)...

    poetress77 commented on A Woman’s Design

    07-19-2009

    lol, you got a Omar Tyree effect to your writing. It amazes me how men can write from a woman's perspective, that was awesome

    SILKYTWEED

    07/20/2009

    I love Oman Tyree, that is quite the compliment, not sure I see it, but I'm flattered that you would say so...he is great...Thanks

    lizology commented on A Woman’s Design

    06-18-2009

    Very interesting point of view on the Woman's Design. It's worth a second read; :)

    SILKYTWEED

    06/18/2009

    Thank you....I'm pleased that you found this piece interesting! Thank you soooo much (smile)

    koolaide commented on A Woman’s Design

    06-18-2009

    Wow! That is beautiful. I have a hard time trying to figure out why so many men don't get it, and to read upon your work is very relaxing. Thankyou

    SILKYTWEED

    06/18/2009

    Thanks, men as man and women sometimes have a hard time understanding each other...although we are more dependent upon each other than we care to admit...Your Welcome (smile)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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