a womens Mystery

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I WROTE THIS POEM A FEW YEARS BACK AND ITS MY ANOTHER OF MANY OF FAVORIT PIECE'S.

THE POEMS SPEAKS FROM IT SELF. OF THE GIRFT THAT US WOEMN HAVE.

a womens Mystery

Gods' gift sent to earth.
Stand
next to a man..
who dosnt kno her worth....
dosnt understand why god sent her on this earth.

But one look in her eyes ..her story starts to Unravel.
He likes what he sees....But will neva kno of a womens Mystery.

God gave a women strength...
to handle what ever came her way.
that's why
god gave her curves so us females can swey.


But one look @ her lipz ..her story starts to Unravel.
He likes what he sees....But will neva kno of a womens Mystery.


God gave a women power.
the power to move on to other things
instead of staying and toying with things that dont matter.
gods gift to her was power.
angery women is a force to be reconed with


But one look @ her body"her temple''they say ..her story stars to Unravel.
He likes what he sees....But will neva kno of a womens Mystery.


God gift was the greatest one of all.
so spiritual its as strong as the great wall.
its the love of her self...to all...but it's
the love of a child that she bares on her own.
even thoe it wasnt on her own its a women who give gift to this earth...
we gods helpers women we stand. if it wasnt for us they'll be no men.

so try figuer out who we are...weather its our a$$ our breast ourl legs our thies our lip'z...or our pu$$y and why it feels so good?

but you will never kno '' A Women's Mystery''


copyright  2010   all rights reserved
By Karma

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mdpoetgirl commented on a womens Mystery

02-22-2010

You write very well, karma... just pls clean up your typos, spellings and grammar. I know in places it's intentional, and that works... but your works could be even better if u just fix those other little mistakes - and no, i'm not hatin'. I enjoyed this one.

danmartyjake1 commented on a womens Mystery

12-31-2009

This is a great write. A few mispels, but I could follow along and I liked the meaning of the poem, very much. I do believe that women are stronger and they have a mysterious strength, hard to harness, never get in the way of a woman on a mission.

countrypoet commented on a womens Mystery

11-04-2009

Very insightful and interesting.I have always been fascinated by women,who are intelligent and have a strong spirit. A strong beautiful woman,who is loving,caring,loyal and supportive to her man is the greatest gift any man can ever receive.I really like this poem.

gallaxy commented on a womens Mystery

09-21-2009

Bravo on your " A womens mystery". You have sheded some light on these mysteries. Particular what her main ASSets are and other bodily functions that compliment each other very well which can bring a man, any man down on his knees. Might even create a sensation to you while down there. Men will only know no more than what the women will let them know.You say " If it wasn't for us they'll be no men". But I say to YOU! In turn they'll be no WOMEN. Where'd you get the SPERM??! You gals got yhe POWER to control us MEN. Your bodies will furnish all the artillary you will EVER NEED. Personally speaking for myself, I'll be happy to "SURRENDER" as often as you deem necessary for your GRATIFICATION!! Thank you and I leave you with that thought and eagerly await for your HUMBLE reply.....................................................

poetheart87 commented on a womens Mystery

09-17-2009

This is true and men are too retarded to know that they have something good until usually it's gone. Maybe we should all turn lesbos and leave men in the dust LOL, yeah right, guess we're stuck with these dumbies.

Karma885

09/18/2009

lmao hahahha thanx for your comment. i wanted to make his to empower women. and so far i hit a mark. thanx mamas i'll be sure to comment ur poems

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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