A Word of Wisdom !!

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I wrote this when i was in high school...

A Word of Wisdom !!

  Foolish words are spoken by those who don't understand the real meaning of Life,
  not the money,cars,material things of that sort but the meaning of being able to have 
rights,to love,share with others,
  give when yu have not to give. To have life in yur hands.
  Foolishness is spoken by the dum which are 
lead by the dummer, which is being lead by the dummest, these are foolish one's who have no 
 understanding of what life is, they take 4 granted the meaning of having food and the meaning of having any thing in life . (example): 
They go to the store spend $25 on food and snacks and then they complain that they really didn't want it :
  they just wanted to spend money, that's foolish talk they could have given it to the poor, the unwealthy, or the lady that sit's at the front door beggin for food, and spare change.
  Foolish things as this, our farther in heaven did not teach us so be a wise man..woman and do what's right in life help those that hurt you, teach those that lack wisdom, pray 4 those who mis-use yu and most of all love yur enemies ! 

"Wisdom will save you from the ways of wicked men, from men whose words are perverse, who leave the straight paths to walk in dark ways, who delight in doing wrong and rejoice in the perverseness of evil, who paths are crooked and who are devious in their ways." ( Proverbs 1 12-15) 

(I cry 4) "I CRY 4 YU,DO YU NOT SEE THE HURT THAT THE WORLD SUFFER'S B-CUZ OF YUR FOOLISHNESS

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daniel081180 commented on A Word of Wisdom !!

12-28-2009

baby this work shows that u are wise beyond your years. i love everything about this write. great job i love u!!!

HiddenAngel

12/28/2009

thank u thats why im with u !!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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