Abandoned

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Abandoned

Abandoned???

What goes around comes around. So let it come back around because either I’m going to ride or I’m going to die, I choose to ride the wave until I do indeed drown on my own. Empty handed was my name as a child. Empty handedly I walked with my shadow not too far behind, but soon my shadow abandoned me too. My parents, the sum of insanity plus me, and also the product of insanity plus me times the world. The more I look into the eyes of my makers I cry. My creators have created a semi-monster. Like the deep sea monster but really you got to see deeply inside of me to pull out the monster inside of me. In an instance my name was changed to abandoned mini. Mini, the child with no soul, left all alone to weep and ride the waves until she does indeed drown on her own. Abandonment was her best friend that’s all that she knew, so meet this girl and stay in her world or she might abandon you.

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kareemrocks3 commented on Abandoned

01-26-2010

really amusing and fascinating. I look forward 2 reading more of your work!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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