Acid Rain

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Acid Rain

Burning,
My skin.
Soaking,
My sin.
Torture,
Within.
Do it,
Again.

Fading,
My dreams,
In darkness and light.
Tortured,
I scream,
Throughout the night.

Sensations,
Up and down my spine.
Expectations,
Higher than mine.

Flesh burning,
Blood boiling,
Stomach turning,
I’m broiling.
Feel my pain,
As I drown,
In acid rain.

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RoseFromARose commented on Acid Rain

09-14-2010

I find this to be one of my favorite writes by you that I've read so far. I love every line and I like how you can almost feel the sin eating you away. Oh to be human has it's miseries.

reyjamiei

09/16/2010

Thank you RoseFromARose...This is also one of the oldest poems I've put on this site...

Worthless commented on Acid Rain

05-20-2010

You got some good titles see that's my problem is some days i think of all kinds of titles and others i just write the words that come to mind and can't think of a good title for it to fit. What's wrong with me? No one knows.

dancinghawk commented on Acid Rain

11-19-2009

as we turn our planet into our own personal hell ... nice write, reyjmiei ... deeply felt ... -dh

reyjamiei

11/19/2009

Thank you... dancinghawk...

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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reyjamiei’s Poems (64)

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to be like him 3
If Life Were A Song 1
Remember Me 1
I’m Not As Happy As You Think I Am 1
Pain 1
Through My Window 1
leaving sodom and gomorrah 3
The Beast Within 2
Blind 1
The Key To My Broken Heart 1
I Could Never See 1
No Need 1
one of the nights i killed myself 1
Your Two Eyes 3
She Said 2
The Sun Will Rise 2
I Saw You This Morning 2
The Struggle Within 2
Acid Rain 3
War 1
When East Meets West 1
i love you 1
Yours To Keep 3
I Tried To See You There 2
Today 1
What If…? 4
Tell Me 1
This Room 1
a little piece of heaven 1
messiah 1
hell 1
Slow Suicide 2
Tomorrow 1
room to grow 2
the letter i never sent 2
Mother Nature 2
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Fragile 2
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Love Is A Mystery 3
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Silence 1
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Life Hits You Suddenly 3
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Forgotten Lies 2
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I Found God 5
The Speed Of Life 3
Alone In Love 3
Extension 1
Somewhere In My House Of Cards 2
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Ode To No One 5
Let Me Worship You 9
I Never Meant 6