Acid Rain

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Acid Rain

Burning,
My skin.
Soaking,
My sin.
Torture,
Within.
Do it,
Again.

Fading,
My dreams,
In darkness and light.
Tortured,
I scream,
Throughout the night.

Sensations,
Up and down my spine.
Expectations,
Higher than mine.

Flesh burning,
Blood boiling,
Stomach turning,
I’m broiling.
Feel my pain,
As I drown,
In acid rain.

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RoseFromARose commented on Acid Rain

09-14-2010

I find this to be one of my favorite writes by you that I've read so far. I love every line and I like how you can almost feel the sin eating you away. Oh to be human has it's miseries.

reyjamiei

09/16/2010

Thank you RoseFromARose...This is also one of the oldest poems I've put on this site...

Worthless commented on Acid Rain

05-20-2010

You got some good titles see that's my problem is some days i think of all kinds of titles and others i just write the words that come to mind and can't think of a good title for it to fit. What's wrong with me? No one knows.

dancinghawk commented on Acid Rain

11-19-2009

as we turn our planet into our own personal hell ... nice write, reyjmiei ... deeply felt ... -dh

reyjamiei

11/19/2009

Thank you... dancinghawk...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

reyjamiei’s Poems (64)

Title Comments
Title Comments
jesus was a man 14
My Friend’s Name Herein Lies 3
Heart’s Mourning 2
to be like him 3
If Life Were A Song 1
Remember Me 1
I’m Not As Happy As You Think I Am 1
Pain 1
Through My Window 1
leaving sodom and gomorrah 3
The Beast Within 2
Blind 1
The Key To My Broken Heart 1
I Could Never See 1
No Need 1
one of the nights i killed myself 1
Your Two Eyes 3
She Said 2
The Sun Will Rise 2
I Saw You This Morning 2
The Struggle Within 2
Acid Rain 3
War 1
When East Meets West 1
i love you 1
Yours To Keep 3
I Tried To See You There 2
Today 1
What If…? 4
Tell Me 1
This Room 1
a little piece of heaven 1
messiah 1
hell 1
Slow Suicide 2
Tomorrow 1
room to grow 2
the letter i never sent 2
Mother Nature 2
Bordello Song 3
Fragile 2
I Know What It’s Like 3
Ballade 1
Internal Civil War 2
Love Is A Mystery 3
Childhood 1
Silence 1
No Need 1
I Find Peace 2
Life Hits You Suddenly 3
In My Eyes 2
My Love 3
Forgotten Lies 2
i believe in you 3
firstborn 8
I Found God 5
The Speed Of Life 3
Alone In Love 3
Extension 1
Somewhere In My House Of Cards 2
In The Silence Of Your Voice 5
Ode To No One 5
Let Me Worship You 9
I Never Meant 6