©2010 Find the child in the man (Heart of Dreams)

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Lets find the child in your heart, I want you to laugh, play, and love like tommorrow will never come.

©2010 Find the child in the man (Heart of Dreams)

Dream 11 learn to dream
you work too much for one man
there's never time to let go it seems
let me help you , any way I can.

Work, bills, sickness and blues
the things that take your soul
listen to these words, let them soothe
forget a while , walk with me, feel warm winds blow.

I know it all seems so far out of reach
but trust me because what Im saying
will find you inside, lost is the lesson I teach
we gotta get you away, let you learn to play.

If I can ease your heart or lessen your pain
you just tell me and I'll show you the way
in your eyes I see the blue sky before the rain
I want to show you the sun , chase the grey
so so far away.

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Prettykan82 commented on ©2010 Find the child in the man (Heart of Dreams)

06-13-2010

Wow, this is superb, resonates with my life so well............keep it up!

oneloveALZ commented on ©2010 Find the child in the man (Heart of Dreams)

05-29-2010

This is such a beautiful poem...these lines really touched me "Work, bills, sickness and blues the things that take your soul" It is the truth and i see it everyday

ginga commented on ©2010 Find the child in the man (Heart of Dreams)

05-21-2010

insideme, Such a lovely sentiment that is so humble and caring. ginga

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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