©2010 Open your Heart to Me

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    In my heart, In my thoughts and on my mind there is you

    ©2010 Open your Heart to Me

    Ive tried talking to other guys
    but find myself measuring them to you
    sorting through all the truths and lies
    asking myself over and over what do I do?

    I recognized the feelings washing over me
    Ive never felt so confused all at once
    I told you what I need and how I want it to be
    sitting by this phone waiting on your response.

    I wish you'd call me and make it all right
    tell me all the things I wanted to hear
    thought about you all the night
    praying for you, shedding tears.

    Dont give up on us, Im not ready for it to die
    I have such high hopes for this even still
    I just want you to not let go, please baby try
    because its not too late to make this thing real.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on ©2010 Open your Heart to Me

    06-25-2010

    I think we can all relate to this feeling - not being able to move on bc of comparisons.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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