addiciton

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    • freind
    • sitting here reading all you nice peoples poems.

    addiciton

    they come in all shapes and sizes.
    some have short hair some have long.
    they can get you to do things that are wrong.
    just like alcohol and drugs.
    it will start with just a hug.
    you will lie just to cheat.
    just so you can be out on that street.
    looking for any woman to meet.
    there are good there bad.
    they will lead you on.
    then they will take your heart.
    so they can tear it apart.
    tell you things you want to hear.
    suck you in with that lovely glow.
    then they tell you they will never let you go.
    but before you know it.
    all is lost.
    you paid the price.
    but what was the cost?
    your heart was lost.
    that was the cost just threw into the wind.
    addicition is what they are.
    so just remeber this.
    just watch out for that very first kiss.
    it could be a addicition?

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    loanslanger commented on addiciton

    07-22-2009

    Hey this one is good stuff. I actually took an instrumental of "crush on you" by lil' kim and big and tried to rap this. sounds pretty nice.

    freind

    07/23/2009

    hey i thank you for that i guess someone liked it hope you do fine with it just remeber me i wrote it thank you

    WinterFrost commented on addiciton

    07-20-2009

    How does it go... Women you can't live with them, and you have to bury the bodies carefully

    freind

    07/20/2009

    i have 2 say this thanks 4 the comment loved that reply u r so right

    fallenangel74 commented on addiciton

    07-05-2009

    I totally get what you are trying to get across in this one. I've been there. It happens to women too.

    Gusto commented on addiciton

    07-01-2009

    This is really good. I'm reading fast, I'm only on computer short time...yet this caught my eye and heart. This tells a true story in an interesting catchy way.

    freind

    07/02/2009

    thank-you for the comments you are so very nice at least i know someone is reading them

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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