Addiction

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Addiction

Addiction of life and it's afflicting pain
Know right from wrong but doubtingly never change
Creating a false image just to see who wants to play the game
The addiction of life and it's afflicting pain
Now don't you find it strange that every one wants  the fame
I guess having fame is better than living for GOD some would say
A withered lie makes your neighbor cry but if it's not yourself than why would you try
No matter what route we take we dare not make a mistake For the silent self mistake we made we dare not confess or even whisper to the wind
Instead problems we create again and again
Love is the pleasure of the addicting skin and the pleasure of love is the forbidden sin
The addiction of life and it's afflicting pain Believe me there one in the same

Sincerely & Truthfully
creation

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henryb3 commented on Addiction

03-03-2010

thanks for letting me feel the pain.i totally feel you brother 4 real.

existdown commented on Addiction

09-25-2009

This poem is incredibly moving. I loved your word choice. Keep writing!

soulwriter commented on Addiction

09-25-2009

I randomly chose your homepage and I am delighted to discover your youthful talent... Your "addition" has an intoxing draw to truthfullness and honest feeling. Well done, keep creating so artfully!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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