Addiction

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    Addiction

    Having something control you,
    is hard enough,when a drug
    has a grip,you know,this is
    no bluff.

    You can say in your mind,that
    you are alright,your body and
    actions show all,looking pale,
    from sleepless nights.

    When you are sober,your mind
    says,"we should stop,"but after
    that first hit,you are a tractor,
    and your mind is the crop.

    The damage your doing,is irr-
    eprable,which effects every-
    one around,they often not-
    ice,and dont want to be found.

    When a loved one is addicted,
    and chooses to press on down,
    your family hurts the most,think-
    ing of you,being underground.

    So that's when you step back,
    and look at what you've created,
    your friends and family will
    lend support,and be so elated.

    So,it's up to you,and only you,
    who can start this road to re-
    covery,a new life without add-
    iction,re-teaching yourself,
    on how to discover.

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    knight4696 commented on Addiction

    02-21-2010

    Nice work Intense - Love the message being sent in this one. Great Job! :)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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