ADDICTIONS

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ADDICTIONS

THE WAY LIFE ITS A SHAME,
DAY BY DAY IT DONT SEEM TO CHANGE.
DAY INTO NIGHT AND NIGHT INTO DAY,
EACH BEING ONE IN THE SAME WAY.
ONLY LOYAL TO THE ADDICTIONS,
LIVING LIFE AS IF IT WAS FICTION.
IN THE BOTTOM OF THE BAG OR THE SPOON,
SOME CALL IT HIGH SOME CALL IT DOOM.
COUGHT IN A WEB OF DECEITION,
PUTTEN THE HIGH FIRST AND EVERYONE SECOND.
STEALING FROM FAMILY AND FRIENDS,
NEVER CARING WHO WE HURT IN THE END.
EATING IS OUT OF THE QUESTION,
IF FEELING WHERE KNOWN, THEY WERE LEFT WITH NO EXPREESSION.

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stever commented on ADDICTIONS

11-13-2009

ahhh yes iv been there ,, have a buddy thats still there ,,thanks for the good work..

purplekisses commented on ADDICTIONS

06-18-2009

awwsome... great... i could relate... very well written

lonelywriter commented on ADDICTIONS

06-01-2009

You inspired me to write a poem on my addiction! its going to be alot like this one! Too bad I cant share it with my family, or friends!

SilverGirl commented on ADDICTIONS

05-30-2009

WOW this is totally real man.. i say.. EARLY! Let it out baby boy.. let it out some more. and when you need a friend.. look in my direction because I will surely be here!!! Great feelings shown through here..even though they may be dark.. I can relate to what you wrote.. I hope you can read mine.. there are 8.. fairly short.. but I feel you will benefit from reading them.. in my heart I know you will.. Great Job.. xox SIlver Girl

LIFEWILL

05/30/2009

thank you

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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