ADEAD SOUL

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    • If you knew you couldn't fail, what would you do with your life?....

    ADEAD SOUL

    Like a vine stripped of its unripe grapes
    like a blossomless olive trees
    so be it mine dead soul/
    yet if i speak, not a relieve for mine pain
    and if i refrain, away goes not either
    mine face be redden with weeping
    yet free have been mine hands
    mine spirits broken and mine days are shorter.
    the Ripper does beckon and mine eyne have dimmed
    the lite does shine faintly,
    my days have gone, mine hearts desire have lost the vigor
    where be then Faith....
    whom sees Hope for me, do sermon Him..
    shall to St. Peters Gates ascend with me...or will down befallen and be the lost among the lost

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    Bladebearer commented on ADEAD SOUL

    02-17-2009

    Great work!!!!

    wintergiovanni commented on ADEAD SOUL

    02-16-2009

    wow!

    maryann72961 commented on ADEAD SOUL

    02-16-2009

    very deep

    chadallac74 commented on ADEAD SOUL

    02-16-2009

    Very nice.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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