Aim to please

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    Aim to please
    With no inhibitions I precede to tantalize your sensuality
    Hypnotized by your feminity
    From the way you speak to the curves in your physic
    I’m in a trance that doesn’t cease
    We meet on a spiritual plane
    Mind over matter
    Pleasant thoughts and laughter is all that really matter
    My hearts no longer torn and tattered
    I’m finally at peace
    The imperfections made it perfect
    The game of emotions was all worth it
    At least now I can breath
    Our passion’s rhymatic like ocean currents
    We manifest destiny at sea
    I am you, you are me
    Traveling through eternity endlessly
    Like counting tiny grains of sand on a beach
    Our physical compatibility behooved me
    Tranquility between the sheets
    Love immensely
    Pleasurable needs
    Is all we really need
    Aim to please

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    TheLastPoet commented on Aim to please

    03-09-2010

    Thank you all for reading my poems much appreciated!!!!
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    TheLastPoet commented on Aim to please

    03-09-2010

    Thank you so much Teena Love is Love... you may get your chance
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    TeenaMontana commented on Aim to please

    03-09-2010

    I would Love to Meet U...key word is LOVE!!!!Every time I read this or any of your work I am spellbound.
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    SweetSatin commented on Aim to please

    10-25-2009

    So sexy and loving nice to see a Man willing to express that!
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    EbonyQueen48 commented on Aim to please

    06-09-2009

    This is so beautiful, I am definitely a fan, Your words describe the picture exactly and it warms my heart to read this poem. keep on writing and inspiring others!! you are the best!!!
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