Alive

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  • Allegory

    Alive

    Quiet sad gloomy mad

    whisper inside cold heart drops as

    though a stone thrown

    or

    pistol fires scarf drops

    they're off! its on?

    death knock early forevermore....

    Who ya bettin' for?

    Some come smiling dumb

    Whatcha lookin' for?

    Face numb fingers tingle

    sting burn gasp fade.....away....

    Slip back

    cold splash

    Slap ask worry find

    Feel chest tense spine

    sense pulse

    still cold almost calm

    ALIVE.

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    MikeSiZaChrist commented on Alive

    04-10-2009

    it reads very poetic

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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