Alizia

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  • Devotion

    Alizia
    I wish I could make you understand
    Just exactly how I feel
    The way you make my body tingle
    And fill my mind with zeal
    Your beauty takes my breath away
    And fills me with such hope
    Of spending each and every day with you
    Never finding life out of scope
    So come to me my lovely lady
    And give to me your life
    I will give you peace and love
    And nary a day of strife.

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    dahlusion commented on Alizia

    02-23-2010

    A pile of sweet and honest poetic words delivered with much passion.
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    Artie commented on Alizia

    11-27-2009

    Nice write - Full of strong emotion, and well written. 10 from me
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    teasasue commented on Alizia

    09-21-2009

    this is a nice poem, you did well with this thanks for sharing
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    soulwriter commented on Alizia

    06-24-2009

    Your words do have a rhythm and with few words much is expressed. Well written, keep creating!
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    VamireEd commented on Alizia

    04-21-2009

    The poem sound good.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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