all eyes on you

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    all eyes on you

    if I was stranded
    perhaps a highway
    would you carry me?
    if I came from
    a garbage dump
    would you clean me?
    if I hungered
    for some company
    would you see me?
    if I slept
    on a park bench
    would you cover me?
    if I was here
    and befriended you
    would you befriend me?
    if I was there
    and stood at your door
    would you welcome me?

    I saw you
    and I saw you see me
    and so did they

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    wirlmaster commented on all eyes on you

    06-08-2009

    God has had his hand on your poetry and he is delivering his message through you !! great work and you are a tool for the main man upstairs, we all are !!! whether we want to are not !!! good luck and let me hear from you time to time !!! Wirlmaster !!

    yahdah commented on all eyes on you

    04-20-2009

    I like the poem. It seems to end too soon. I rate it at 8.0 only because it let me loose right after it grabbed me. Read and rate mine. I'm Yahdah.

    lonewolf commented on all eyes on you

    04-16-2009

    i had a poem very similar called perspectives. well done

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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