All Proper Hollow Staples

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All Proper Hollow Staples

 

On  summer dreams, and midnight screams

A shattered bitter fable seems

 

Some wretched jail, a blasphemous tale

A squandered hate that won’t prevail

 

With fruitless casts which never last

All proper hollow staples

 

Its twist begins, irreverent trends

To endure, outlast unable

 

-M. Jacobs

 

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whiteoleander commented on All Proper Hollow Staples

12-14-2009

You have read many of mind and as you know my thought process is very direct... so in other words i can be dense lol however this one particularly has completely enveloped my senses! and is beautifully written =) id love to know the thoughts that went into the making of this !!

danmartyjake1

12/21/2009

This reflects my short style of writing and it's about a relationship that won't last because it is fruitless and it has all of the trimmings, money, power, and comforts. But no true love or passion. All Proper Hollow Staples refers to the basic things a man provides a woman in a relationship. It is not about me.

danmartyjake1

12/21/2009

I am pleased you liked it.

knight4696 commented on All Proper Hollow Staples

11-23-2009

A very curious and intriguing poem ... Even the title. I love the metaphoric imagery you use and once again as usual .. Flow and Rhyme are superb! Great write! .... Ken

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate your viewpoint very much

Grito commented on All Proper Hollow Staples

09-05-2009

When written words are swords, and hopefully their paper won't last long.

danmartyjake1

09/08/2009

thanks

soulwriter commented on All Proper Hollow Staples

09-04-2009

I like many of your poems that have deep meanings and require additional readings to reveal your thought and then to dissect your metaphors. A good piece that brings the past into present. Write ON!

danmartyjake1

09/05/2009

Thanks for your intriguing comments.

keller commented on All Proper Hollow Staples

09-02-2009

very good,very good....I love this style,ten from me

danmartyjake1

09/02/2009

Thanks for your comment and rating. Great to hear from you.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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