All to appreciate

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    All to appreciate

    sense of wisdom lacking as you join in to summarize

    Phrased in terms meant to destabilize

    About its under enjoyment of its playfulness, to jeopardize

    Lessons on inquiries begin to travel counter clockwise
    Appear hostile failing to speak a subject due to compromise

    Vital to casual understanding that I would actualise

    In a tangled web of kisses creating so much distance

    The guilt and shame kept me in resistance

    inspiration now invincible timeless symbolic behaviour

    Realize the time in ones mind it takes too open up the

    The essence so that I taste flavour

    Emotion as The action with romantic ideas that’s trying to communicate

    Animates the truth that dilates with interest

    Cleverly whispers past imagery in forms to appreciate

    All that whispers to focus when day turns to dusk of night

    For me every vision I so defy to comprise

    Is pushed aside, undone, for your reality to you is below illumination

    You call for to obtain a brighter orb,

    Shine some light on the dreams untold, to permit them unfurl

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    dahlusion commented on All to appreciate

    05-01-2013

    "Shine some light on the dreams untold, to permit them unfurl"—the wisdom here is enormously enlightening. Bravo!

    pura

    05/04/2013

    thankyou

    Insideme commented on All to appreciate

    04-30-2013

    yeah I agree,,,,most times we are the main eclipse of our own happiness......great write!

    pura

    05/04/2013

    thankyou

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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