Alone in Heart

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    Alone in Heart

    Alone in heart.....

    My reflextion lost in an illusion.....
    Lost in mist and in space....
    One heart from deep with in....
    Pulls me under with a soft embrace.....
    As it hemorages along the way.....
    Before the day is done.....
    And gone without any trace.........
    Still,there is to see if only by chance......
    Giveing the right circumstance.....
    What it was killing me....
    And now the rain will fall....
    Washing it all away......
    Could one ever be so remote....
    From any and ever possibility....
    An impossible moment......
    If only just to be free.....
    In a constant confustion.......
    For so long that's been my place.....
    Her heart from deep with in.....
    Pulls me under with out a chase.....
    As we both hemorage along the way..........
    Fadeing with the setting sun........
    Leaveing memories in it's place......                          By Bryan

     

     

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    kdavidscott1 commented on Alone in Heart

    06-04-2009

    A few spelliing errors - now that that's over - I loved what you working with and your attempt to express it was very good - break ups are not always easy and leaves memories of love to haunt you... KD
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    Kukia

    06/04/2009

    Again,TY Davidscott

    lois2lane245 commented on Alone in Heart

    06-02-2009

    we must work on the same wave length cause i understand this compleatly iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilike iiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttt
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    Kukia

    06/05/2009

    TY lois2lane,Thats one of the best compliments I've recieved and many have been graciouse

    sincere commented on Alone in Heart

    06-01-2009

    Very good, i love a man who is not afraid to express and show his feelings. Keep up the good work buddy.
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    SilverGirl commented on Alone in Heart

    05-31-2009

    You are so very in tune with your emotions.. Such love is rare to find.. and these days even rarer to keep. I love how you paint a picture in each and every thing you write..Hugs Silver Girl
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    I have to compet with melodies and arrangements but I'm so happy u took time on me!

    Dimoyas commented on Alone in Heart

    05-30-2009

    Few spelling errors and ever imposibilities makes no sence to me. Your reflection your heart your memories all mixed and confused, must have been love...
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    TY this is a srta mystical thing

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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