alone in my head

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    alone in my head

      Do you know what its like to be alone in your head
    your thoughts of being alone in the dark
      being alone with just you in your big dark bed
    not knowing if i will ever make my mark

    I can see the clouds of silence 
      not too far ahead in the foggy air
    wishing they were further away in the distance
      Not even being able to care

      Will someone eventually come to reel me in
    pull me out of this hell on earth inside
      maybe love me enough to crush all of my sin
    be someone in whom i can completely confide

    I hope the brick walls will eventally fall
      no more holding me back inside of my mind
    becoming something more than my all
      my faith for him eventually i will find!
     

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    ajz1966 commented on alone in my head

    05-11-2011

    Beautifully put. For anyone who has ever felt isolation and despair... this poem sums it up. I wish I could say something more constructive but I can only blather on about what I have already said. You have done such a good job of capturing the thoughts of one alone and in despair.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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