Alone in this cruel world

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    • I know I shouldn't be allowed to post on this site compared to soo many of you. Many of my friends on here are much better poets than I can ever dream of and I thank everyone of you who read and comment on my childish things and I apologize for my poems I know they are not good.

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    I am tired of life and less scared of death

    Alone in this cruel world

    I am all alone

    No one to love me

    No one to hold me

    All alone

    I am no ones world

    No one wishes to be with me

    No one wishes to be mine

    I’m all alone in this world

    My life is floating by

    Kind of like I already died

    Black tar covering my nose and eye

    Oh I think I’m going to die

    Please let it be quick

    This tar is killing me as it stick

    To my lungs my insides my nose and eye

    I will die

    When I die no one will love me

    No one will miss me

    I’m not missed when I die

    I’m not loved when I die

    I’M ALL ALONE IN THIS CRUEL WORLD

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    bandit1192 commented on Alone in this cruel world

    11-16-2010

    When I read this, it takes me back to a time long ago. Not everyone will admit it, but I remember times when I thought I was all alone in the world and would not be able to go on living. I found reasons to crawl out of bed and keep going. Eventually, you'll realize there is so much ahead that you can't see now. Don't give up before you begin. TS
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    TheDreamWalker

    11/16/2010

    Thank you for reading. I will try not to give up

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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