Alone.....

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Alone.....

Alone....


I was reading in the pages of a book that told of wishes,fairytales,and dreams.......
Where all these things can come true but,I knew if I seen your face,it was all in you.....
I remember when I first saw you,you were chaseing clouds across a field that went on forever.....
Yet you loathed the sidewalks you had to walk upon never to touch your feet.....
And all I could think about is maybe one day,you'll look my way........
But,no amount of majic could ever replace you now that you went away,now that your gone.....
The visions I see of you only in mist torment my dreams,thoughts of you wont leave my mind....
Mistakes no matter thier nature hides trueths of absolutes so trajicaly.....
I no longer have the luxiory of time that remain unless there's made for a change.....
If I could only gaze into your eyes again and see your face just one last time.....
I believe I could find the place where wishes,fairytales,and dreams come true.....
It realy doesn't matter being blessed when theres no one there that's you.......


by Bryan...... 

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ditr052009 commented on Alone.....

03-01-2010

Very good! U took a depressing subject and wrote about it beautifully

Kukia

03/01/2010

A very kind crituqie,Arigoto gozaimasu,rei.

frazel5 commented on Alone.....

12-29-2009

Oh wow......so sad. I can feel the pain coming from your words. Flow is good, but could be better. It's so filled with emotion and sadness, but there will come a day that you find someone. And I hope that day comes soon. ~the fraz

Kukia

12/30/2009

I'm very greaful for ur crituqe.I sorta knew I had rushed it a bit and hell,I'm nt sure of the title,hehee...It's nothin new,I'm always doin erwrites.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Kukia’s Poems (23)

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Save Me... 0
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Last Regrets(repri
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1
Remember the Nights 1
The Fox Who Became a Human Girl 5
I'll be there for you...(revise
d)
4
Alone..... 3
Faith and Dreams 6
An Anime Lulliby 3
Live Delierately 2
Matters of the Heart 2
Slow Ride 4
The Canary 2
Somewhere,Som
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3
The Key 7
This work is not of my own 2
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Alone in Heart 6
The Oceans 7
Should I.... 3
Shadows 7
DOMINION 5