Alone

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    Alone

    Alone

    I’m at a party
    In a room full of people
    They’re chatting, laughing, having fun
    I’m sitting in a room full of people
    And yet I’ve never felt so alone
    And I just want to run away
    Find myself a hideaway
    But I’m in a room full of people
    Where do I go to feel like I’m not alone
    I haven’t the foggiest idea
    So it begins to rain inside my brain
    Tears well up in my eyes
    I try to blink them away
    (Never let them see you cry)
    But a single tear escapes and trickles down my cheek
    Here comes another – the first refuses solitude
    I wipe at them furiously
    Clawing at my face
    Rubbing tear-tracks away
    And when they have subsided
    The music is once again the only thing that fills my brain
    And it is safe to open my eyes again
    I do, and my gaze meets yours
    I see my pain mirrored in your eyes
    The way your hair falls down, hiding your face
    I don’t remember moving
    Yet suddenly I am next to you
    And we are talking
    Really talking
    For, whoever you are, gentle stranger,
    You speak the language of my spirit
    You understand my soul
    You hear the words between my words
    And I can say the same for you
    Now we’ve come to know each other
    Know the faces that lay underneath the paints and masks
    And those rambling, babbling people have vanished
    Leaving in this huge, empty, cavernous room
    Two specks of dust turned into people
    You and me
    And I can’t even remember
    Feeling alone
    All the darknesses, pains, and fears
    Like those partying people, have disappeared
    And though its just you and me
    Inside that big empty room
    I feel like my soul is radiating a warm, warm light
    And I know you feel that way too
    Because it’s nice to have someone to talk to
    It’s great having someone who knows the true meaning of friendship
    And knowing that you’re not alone
    Is the most wonderful feeling there is.

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    queendee commented on Alone

    10-21-2009

    I am thanking you also for your poetry it is a breath of freash air!

    tripplett commented on Alone

    03-14-2009

    I just wanted to thank you for entering my big, empty room. Reading your poem has helped me dry a few tears in this, a period of loss, that I have been experiencing. You show incredible wisdom, and the ability to get outside of yourself, which I sometimes lack. I thank you again for your illuminating donation.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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