Alone

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Alone

Am I alone

Went to war

Came back four times

Still alone

Loved a woman

Four times

Still ended the day alone

Reached out to others

A dance or two

Ten years worth

Still alone

Ride into the sunset

Still alone

Write poetry

Write letters

Still alone

I swim

I run

I work out

Still alone

I fight fires

Still alone

I’ve done a lot with my life

I’ve survived a lot

But no matter where or what I do with my life

I’m still alone

I’m not understood by any

I’m not Loved by any (woman)

I have to go through all of life’s hardships

Alone

Bear the weight of all my life’s pain

Alone

It doesn’t seem fair

When so much of my life has been spent

Serving my nation or another

Saving homes or lives

When does this so called “Hero”

Get to be saved

From loneliness

I’m condemned

Maybe even cursed

To the fate I’m in

Alone in the sunset

Alone

So bitterly alone…

-Fin-

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poett commented on Alone

01-30-2014

Emotional piece... look my oldest son is 25 and I always tell him that no one knows when the right one may come. She may be right at your nose and you haven't notice her admiring your smile. Sometimes we look for the wrong things on the wrong people and forget to look a little deeper into what should matter the most. Don't look for anything specific but someone who is open minded and loves with an open heart. Sometimes its best to be alone than with the wrong persons who may make you feel more alone than you truly are. My son has learned this the hard way. Anyways enjoy being single, don't rush into any relationship until you are sure its truly love. How will you know? Well all I can say is that when a woman truly loves a man she tries her best to impress him, care for him n love him over anything and everyone. Look for someone who loves the things you do... good luck n smile cause your princess might be looking at you all the time ;)

TheLastCowboy

02/04/2014

You are absolutely correct !!!

Trista3 commented on Alone

12-20-2013

that is gut wrenching. no, its not fair. its not right. you should have to bare it all alone. not after all you have done and been through. good write.

TheLastCowboy

12/23/2013

All I know in my life is loneliness, its my curse... I have friends, I have family, BUT I dont have Love and it tears my Heart to pieces...

Trista3

12/23/2013

I meant to say " you shouldn't have to bare it all alone" not should.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.
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