Always You

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Always You

Though pain may rip the soul I live with,

And maim my heart, my will to strive,

I know you're always right here with me,

You’re always loyal at my side.

 

When sorrow drowns my gentle smile,

When darkness takes over my light,

It's you I call for and always answers,

It’s always you from end to start.

 

When anger blinds my better judgment,

You reach for me and calm my storm,

You whisper love and peace into me,

And all my worries are soon gone.

 

When my hope weakens you feed it passion,

You light my way throughout the nights,

Your heart is pure, your love, breathtaking,

Your eyes are the envy of the stars.

 

My heart rejoices in your presence,

You're all I wished for and then some,

My nights you fill with soft caresses,

Your tender kisses reach my core.

 

For you I'd fight a thousand battles,

I’d endure tortures no man can bear,

I'd make the skies cry diamonds for you,

And fill with gold your hands and hair.

 

My heart you’ve won, my soul you’ve conquered,

My every breath I breathe for you,

It’s you I love, I hold and cherish,

My love you know, it’s always you.

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sassysweet commented on Always You

02-09-2011

To have someone that makes you feel like this is beautiful. People don't understand that when you find the one that changes everything in your heart to great, from a bad day to a horrible night into this beautiful butterfly, you hold on to htem. This is a great poem. Keep it up.

freddycruz89

02/09/2011

Thank you =] I’m really glad you liked it. It’s always good to know that someone else can relate to our feelings. If it’s not too much to ask, could you read my other poems when you have a chance and rate them? I would truly appreciate it =D

ViolentEyes1 commented on Always You

12-03-2010

Very passionate! Your verses evoke the very emotions you hope to capture with the words you've aptly chosen to describe them. Well done!

freddycruz89

12/03/2010

Thank you =] glad you liked it.

Supermike commented on Always You

10-23-2010

I'm glad you've found someone to make you this happy congrats my friend and though I must say your words brought this poem to life I would normally just say something silly but this one made me feel better inside like there is someone out there for everyone and not just crazy people wanting false love. So I say again good job and I look forward to seeing and reading more of your work... Supermike

freddycruz89

10/25/2010

Thank you =]

arronpalmer commented on Always You

10-21-2010

Such a powerful and heartfelt exclamation of your love, executed with alarming skill. It's easy for this to come off sickly, but the rhymeless flow and sense of steady, controlled rhythm really do bring this to the next level. A great poem, truly.

freddycruz89

10/21/2010

Thanks I'm glad you like it =D

heartflower commented on Always You

10-21-2010

You have captured the very essence of youth in your words and yet you have shown maturity in you're writing nice work

freddycruz89

10/21/2010

Thank you =]

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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