Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

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Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

Things I do for people
they do not ask me-
I share willingly, i'm a fool
little help I get back, not satisfactory.

I don't ask anyone for much, as I re-call
just honesty...sharing adventures-
friendship; is what I ask out of "All"
not half truth..no shows..alone I sit , in the future.

Whatever happened, to a humane human ?
    
          Jan. 27, 2007
             Chrisjan

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jj1562 commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

12-13-2020

"what ever happened to a humane humane" ouch. Very impactful and poignant. Your poems have a good theme but could do with a bit of meter.

amithissecret commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

07-25-2009

iI am alot like that so much its like you took the words i wanted to speak and put them on ?paper? but yes the heart is free if we let it be but those who dont understand dont trust i like this poem

Aza commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

07-13-2009

I am a lot like this poem. We're not fools. People don't appreciate, respect, or understand the heart because it is free

Chrisjan

07/14/2009

Each word you have written is very true ! Thank you for understanding.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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