Am I Finished With You?

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    Am I Finished With You?

     You say you wanted more
    but never considered me
    in the big scheme of things.
    Nothing seemed to change
    when I tried to be who you
    wanted me to be.

    Burry me, carry me
    your killing me inside and out.
    Taking my freedom
    filling my head and heart
    with doubt.
    But will I still love you
    forever and always
    a promise too you
    with a ring. 

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    charmlessman2d commented on Am I Finished With You?

    07-27-2011

    love this title. I gotta say, i'm becoming a bonifide fan with every poem i read from you. add me. I'd love to keep reading more.
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    pdxgrrll

    07/27/2011

    OK..WOW.. Thank you again for the flattery and compliments. Haven't been on here for awhile, so this made my day seeing your comments.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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