Am I Finished With You?

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Am I Finished With You?

You say you wanted more
but never considered me
in the big scheme of things.
Nothing seemed to change
when I tried to be who you
wanted me to be.

Burry me, carry me
your killing me inside and out.
Taking my freedom
filling my head and heart
with doubt.
But will I still love you
forever and always
a promise too you
with a ring. 

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charmlessman2d commented on Am I Finished With You?

07-27-2011

love this title. I gotta say, i'm becoming a bonifide fan with every poem i read from you. add me. I'd love to keep reading more.

pdxgrrll

07/27/2011

OK..WOW.. Thank you again for the flattery and compliments. Haven't been on here for awhile, so this made my day seeing your comments.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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