America: The Not-So-Fucked-Up. (Reply poem to "Red, White and Blue by Sanctus)


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My home is not to blame... For Humans are the wrong ones.

America: The Not-So-Fucked-Up. (Reply poem to "Red, White and Blue by Sanctus)

The society of my home,
America, the proud.
A fucked up nation,
This is not our fault.
We were led by a fool or two,
Some of us sat in his cells,
While the rest of society paved the road to hell.
The same child and the same man,
Oh yes, the same gun.
"Blow away the infant because we do not care,
We will give birth again... Migration will set in."
The bitch just had her litter,
Let them run a-stray.
For this is how humans are to the world.
This place is not to blame,
Just because the human race is such a shame.
Critisize and burn our flag,
We wont hide our faces no longer.
For, I am proud to call this fucked up travesty my home,
Yes, oh yes, we choose to fight-
Because the moment we stop fighting for eachother,
Is the moment we lose our humanity.

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Shelbylolann commented on America: The Not-So-Fucked-Up. (Reply poem to "Red, White and Blue by Sanctus)


I edited this because you guys were right... PARTLY! I am no better if I put down our own leaders... This is how I TRUELY FEEL!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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-Up. (Reply poem to "Red, White and Blue by Sanctus)
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