Amigo Mio

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  • ladydraeko
  • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

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i am lifelong friends with a wonderful man, husband and father of beautiful children in Colombia. I am relearning spanish. this is my first poem in a year and i wrote it for him as he is sad at the moment. Cheer up my friend. I love you.

Amigo Mio

Amigo Mio

My friend.

Tho years and miles separate us

You know my heart, mi Corazon

Your gentle words

Your loving smile

You touch my life, mi vida

Reach out for love

It is not gone

They  love you, te quiren

Tengo mi Corazon

No estes  triste

Por que eres amado.

Jj 6/19/2010

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AmadeusEx commented on Amigo Mio

06-27-2010

very heartfelt and genuine, and you hit all the spanish that i know..well done

purdylox commented on Amigo Mio

06-23-2010

I really liked this poem simple and nice you really see that you want your friend to smile

redbloodink commented on Amigo Mio

06-22-2010

ok I didn't understand all of it.... but it seems like a love poem between friends.... red

ladynight commented on Amigo Mio

06-19-2010

that was a beautifully sweet poem. i loved it's simplicity. no metaphors or undefinable words. just your simple feelings laid out to show someone u care. even though i don't understand spanish i like that u incorporated it into ur poem. wonderfully written.

Artie commented on Amigo Mio

06-19-2010

This poem is pure emotion - great write - 10 from me

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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