Among The Threads

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A depressing time in my life... raising 4 children with the wife... not all things are as they seem. All things perfected?

Among The Threads

Quiet is the eve with ire I passed among the dead.
Yet, Still… are the thoughts that banged around within my head?

So peaceful rests the fear, thus gone?
The night doth leave at break of dawn?

My soul the night forever haunts.
My heart it cries for love not taunts.

The stairwell echoes of my breathing,
My heart is pounding hands are seething.

The roof hatch closed, yet rafters waiting.
The hour is near, my heart debating.

The rope just lies upon the ground,
The task so easy thus I've found.

Thoughts of cost do linger here,
Rationalizations leer.

Grab the rope… my hands are sweating.
First try miss, bad luck, I'm betting.

The second… brings one step, closer near fate.
One more breath, may be all, my lungs do take.

Another time stood the task before,
I wept, I thought, and shut the door.

To end up six feet under ground,
Would that be all? Of dust, a mound?

To be so certain of such a fate,
Would make it easy, I wouldn't wait.

That window gone the time draws near.
Another arrives, hide the fear.

Again that roof hatch, closed I'll see.
Another chance for life to be…

Or not...

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

PernellRodocker’s Poems (15)

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How I Got Here I'm Not Sure 0
Misty Blue: Fur of White Eyes of Blue 1
My Forever Friend 3
Can You Be Alone? 2
Poetry Is This 2
Why Do You Love Me? 5
Among The Threads 0
Delusions Of Peace 1
Cancer 1
Chapter: 7 1
I know you. 0
Forgive Me 0
FREEDOM FROM THE CAGE 2
WHY DO YOU LOVE ME 1
A TEAR 2