Amuse you eyes

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    Amuse you eyes
    I wrote this poem
    You read this poem
    I pretend to be insightful and use clever metaphors
    You believe them
    My poem is thought provoking
    You'll think after you read this
    I throw poem structure out the window
    You look outside your window for it
    My poem is almost finished
    "Fill in the Blanks" you finish my poem

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    SILKYTWEED commented on Amuse you eyes

    07-21-2009

    Excellent Write....although I must say I'm glad I'm alone cuz if people were watching my face they'd be laughing....excellent work Ceol....
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    poeticdimension commented on Amuse you eyes

    04-27-2009

    This is great. Very funny!!!!
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    cottonluv commented on Amuse you eyes

    03-15-2009

    lol cute ppl will be surprised good work lol
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    origionalmerlin commented on Amuse you eyes

    03-15-2009

    you forgot to leave out the spellchecker (grinz)
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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