An angel i saw at the park; by Darth

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    • VampireGirl666
    • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

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    my friend wrote this

    An angel i saw at the park; by Darth

    An angel that i just saw
        That girl left in the park
        Why is she so lonely?
        Have her senses gone dark?
        
        I sit next to her...
        with a handsome smile
        I said next to that angel
        Girl where have u been in a while?
        
        Now she thinks im stupid
        And i shouldn't be born
        So i came up with a dumb corny line
        "We're pieces of paper. never torn"
        
        She giggled a little
        then said mildly
        hey mister...
        "stfu. talk quietly"
        
        I smiled back
        and she did the same
        I just created this poem
        So it was pretty lame

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    killingP13 commented on An angel i saw at the park; by Darth

    02-11-2011

    wow funny lol its so random i love it!!!!!! lol XD

    VampireGirl666

    02/12/2011

    haha yea thanks ill tell him xD

    mustascheman commented on An angel i saw at the park; by Darth

    12-30-2010

    Who's Darth in this piece? Anyway....not bad...kind funny for a poem out of the blue. I read your bio..that's quite an attitude you have there...good for you! Just be you and not even stop to ponder what others think of feel about you ( except for certain family members, if you have any that you are close to). I say; to each their own and being different is cool. You want to see different? go read some of my work. Later A.T.

    VampireGirl666

    12/30/2010

    Darth is my best friend. outta randomness to cheer me up he came up with this poem.:) hes such a weirdo but he did manage to amke me smile

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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