An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

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  • ValentineD
  • is tired going to go try to sleep hopefully no nightmares

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For someone hwom is dear to my heart

An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

An angel In My Eyes


Fell to earth,
Lit every conner
with light
ever so bright.
The darkness ran with fright.
What fell form earth,
so beutiful
an angel.
That angel was you,
Luck was with me,
for you seemed ment for me.
Was it folly,
or a dream.
Horrid would it be if this is but a dream,
but your still there
right where you fell from
heaven.

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BooTz commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

06-30-2009

this is a very pretty piece. the flow is calm&easy. very well done daniel ;p

Chaos128 commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

06-30-2009

Sharp stuff, Val. There's brightness in your words and well as your descriptions, and the feelings you're expressing are vividly clear.

ValentineD

06/30/2009

thanx chaos

Benny commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

06-25-2009

Its so lovely poem. I enjoyed it so much. You are the angel of the earth

Raven1721 commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

06-25-2009

i love it. it's very beautiful and very passionate.

superjayallday commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

06-24-2009

simple but very touching great read straight from the heart

ValentineD

06/24/2009

thank very much

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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