AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

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    AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    By Joseph J. Conte July 27, 2009

     

     

    Sometime ago, I met my Angel in the mist,

    When and where, is noted on a missing list.

     

    Her shiny hair, bright eyes, and her lovely face,

    Shown thru the mist, that was like transparent lace.

     

    The words she uttered were warm, and delightful for me to hear,

    Each syllable, a tingling rapture, a melody of satin, soft to my ear.

     

    In the beginning the mist, surrounding this Angel was very slow to lift,

    Foolishly my heart peered through it, and grabbed the Angel as a gift.

     

    Months went by, and the essence of this Angel, slowly drifted away,

    Busy nights and busy days, this and that, seemed to keep the Angel at bay.

     

    The Angel continued her life’s work, the mist became more coveting,  

    She was no longer visible, my heart struggled, slowly love was dying.

     

    I made a mental note, as the mist took my Angel, and I lost her in the dark,

    My mind will never let her leave my heart, my love will always remain a spark.

     

    My final thought, is that I have loved an Angel, one who could never be mine,

    The lovely sweet Angel in the Mist, gone forever, leaving me alone to pine.

     

     

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    poeticmaster69 commented on AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    08-01-2021

    You paint a good picture with your words...thankyou for sharing

    kmooney commented on AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    09-13-2009

    Nice work Mr. Conte. Appreciate all your offerings. You do have a way with words. Our styles are a bit different. I have a similar poem called God's Perfect Angel that you may enjoy. I would be interested in your take. This one I enjoyed but not as much as Magic Dream Machine and Fire. Keep 'em coming. You have a unique style that I like. Kevin.

    josephconte

    09/13/2009

    Thanks Kevin I will read your poem now.

    IrishMs commented on AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    09-05-2009

    Well structured with Beautiful imagery and sad that the angel has left you. Thank you for sharing.

    josephconte

    09/05/2009

    Thank you for your most kind comment.

    jeanpnkldyg commented on AN ANGEL IN THE MIST

    08-17-2009

    How lovely. I like the visual of mist. I am inspired! Thank you.

    josephconte

    08/17/2009

    Thanks for the compliment you may enjoy the others as well.

    josephconte

    08/17/2009

    Thanks for the compliment you may enjoy the others as well.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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