An Old Story

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    I'm really impressed at how this one turned out, its ment to be read fast.

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    An Old Story

    Since the beginning of human time

    The power of un-earthly rhyme

    Streas of word, chorus inside

    Symphony of speach to thim I abide


    My mind writes these difficult manuvers

    Singing it's solo amoung the white papers

    Stillness of words and languages of old

    Speaking out more powerful and bold


    Oath keeper King slayer i can make all

    By the stars in the sky, all shall fall

    Carefully manuvering from rhyme to fate

    The power of word brings mind a new state


    Upon these pages, blood will be spilled

    White on crimson, a promise upheld

    The poet, a thinker, mind a blown

    Once no longer shall poem be shown

    Laid upon grass under softened soil

    Lives the mind of poetic appeal

    I have no guardian, I am alone

    From mind to nerve, from blood and bone

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    stever commented on An Old Story

    02-11-2010

    wow what a great rock tune this could make , love your point of veiw, and also thank you for commenting on all my poems..StEvEr

    EvilPoems

    12/11/2012

    you should check out some of my other works!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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