AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

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This is something I wrote just to make others smile, the same way owls do for me. I like owls. They are cute and I like their who who's lol...

AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

"Who! Who!", cried a boy owl at flight. "Who! Who!", a girl owl replied with fright. "Who! Who may be the one for my heart? ", said the boy owl confused that peculiar night. "Who! Who ever cares honestly right from the start" replied the girl owl smiling to him sweetly. "Who! Who? I wonder who can she be?" The boy owl looking around who he could see. "Who! Who stays close by your side", getting a little closer to him the girl owl replied. "Who!Who replies to your doubts every night?" Insisted the girl owl hinting him from behind. "Who! Who is she? Why hide away from my light?" Asked the boy owl now anxious cluelessly blind. "Who! Who is afraid to reveal her feelings to you?" Blushing the girl owl bowed her head too... "Who! Who? Oh! I never thought she would do! Happily said the boy owl knowing the truth. "Who! Who?", And before she could complete her reply, owl boy kissed her lovingly. Then stayed forever right by her side. Who! Who! Are an owl's love cries ... © 2013 by Mary C. Pulido

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Trista3 commented on AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

11-25-2013

that is a really cute poem. I like that. well done.

poett

11/27/2013

Thank you :)

kkirkwood commented on AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

04-24-2013

I like your image of an owl and how you relate it to love

poett

04/24/2013

Lol thank you... I think owls are interesting n mysterious plus don't sleep much like me ha...

tierra7 commented on AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

01-29-2013

Simply adorable Mary!! Love & Light, Tierra @}-'-,

poett

01/29/2013

Truly appreciate you stopping by n your kind words hugs

dahlusion commented on AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

01-18-2013

such beautiful writing in using the owl metaphor —bravo!

poett

01/20/2013

Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate your time n kindness. Hugs

gogant commented on AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES

01-08-2013

Who can resist the who-T owl.............so cute. Nice to read....

poett

01/08/2013

;) thanks gogant

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