An Uncouth Poem

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    A villanelle poem inspired by awful relationship with my ex girlfriend

    An Uncouth Poem

     Eyes that hold uncut truth 
    Your falsities fall like " tired out stripped Five-Nines "
    Read as a single lie uncouth

    Among your falsehoods for truth I did sleuth
    Fettered in your fabricated lines
    Eyes that hold uncut truth

    On trial for the crimes of your youth
    My lust resigns
    Read as a single lie uncouth

    Your secret truth burns like vermouth
    Your juice tasted heavy of putrid limes
    Eyes that hold uncut truth

    Scared by your eyetooth
    Mumbled truths of mine never refines
    Read as a single lie uncouth

    When she haunts the back doors of Duluth
    Button up keep your flesh in line
    Eyes that hold uncut truth
    Read as a single lie - uncouth  

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